Another Week

This week I finished the script and changed some of the dialoge to sound more natural, because like i said before the dialoge was very very scripted sounding, and some what racist. (old white guy telling young black girl how to do her OWN JOB!) This must be the longest thing I have every typed

No work this week

This week I only revised the script. I made the script sound more natural, Because its very very scripted and is extremely boring to watch. It turns out the the script that i typed was 4,000 words and it was 14 pages long. WOW! this must be the logest thing i have ever typed. I will continue to make it better.